Thanks people for calling me out; I apologise to everyone and especially Rawhemp if I sounded like a dick...I gotta be more careful with my choice of words in the future!

Rawhemp, please realise that we're on the same side and that you do deserve kudos for what you are trying to do with your article. We are your peers and our feedback and critique are valuable in the improvement of your article. Now, as I said before it is a poorly written article and with many omissions. Even though there is fair information in there, it really needs more work to bring it to a standard.

For a start, as nen explained better than me) your use of scientific terminology obviously means that you do not target the article to laymen and the improper use of scientific terms alienates the science-minded.