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Even Gods die...(a trip without DMT-enjoy)

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maymay

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Even Gods die...


It has been a while since I took my last breath,
For I have only taken one and never since then.

I wonder how it feels to see,to hear,to taste,to feel,
to hate,to love,to have some fear[...]

I am blind and mute and deaf and cold
I have made A wish and still it grows.


...for I am long dead
living on inside your head.




Hope you liked it...I couldn't sleep
 
...it's called spartan writing.It's the most perfect description of the writers thoughts because it is written in an instant but in perfect harmony,it's the philosopher's stone of the human art...although you've stopped reading, your brain is in a loop of thoughts not noticing that it is over...it's like a bug in you brains software,read it again and pay attention to how you're reduced to the simplest way of thought...hence the term spartan writing...it can go even deeper with fewer words,that's even more interesting maybe next time
 
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