I wrote a poem

[areyouanywhere]

Well I guess it would be called that? I don't think many would appreciate it except maybe some here. I am not a writer, so please don't be to hard on me! I only wrote what I felt while... well, you know!


I am? I am left with more questions then answers
That is the point
Life is a mystery

I thought I knew what thinking was
They showed me what is really is
Question everything
Because sometimes you think you know
And that stops you from knowing

It's a mystery
I can see inside of me
In a way I never thought could be
For this I thank you
I am forever grateful.

 

[ms_manic_minxx]

Do you play an instrument? Can you turn it into a song?

Succinct. I like it, and it resonates.

Keep writing... what a beautiful way to log your journeys.

 

[areyouanywhere]

No I don't play an instrument, but I have always wanted to learn. I could probably change some things around to sound better, but I think I should leave it be. Thank you for your kind words, their will be much more to come.

 

[cellux]

Don't worry, this is just great.

 

[Pandora]

areyouanywhere,

Nice work man! Normally, I'm strictly a prose girl - poetry doesn't do much for me. I felt deep resonance with your work . . .

Pece & Love,
Pandora

 

[ragabr]

Thank you for sharing!

 

[○]

My favorite way of conveying an experience is through hymns of sorts or a short amount of words..such as a poem...much like this.

Very nice

 

[areyouanywhere]

Thank you everyone for your positive feedback, I love all of you.