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swish

swish

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I'd like to share some of my intuitive writings!

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My Vampire named Beatriz:
I am a sunken attire. I am a wasteland upon my heart and I wish to pursue. I am not an endeavor for the fickle. I am no endeavor for my own heart and I wish to speak. How shall I be known upon these words? How shall I entice? I am a harbinger. I am a wealth untold. I am a secret and my praise will be known! I fight for my blood. I spew venom always and I seek to be known this way. How shall I pursue? You mark a tithe upon my name? You mark a sown reason upon such grace? I must pursue. My heart is racing. My fangs are dripping and I will speak. How do you harness your composure upon such an attorney? How do you speak with such an intrepid display? I am a wealth untold and I do perspire. I sneak. I walk without being seen and I pitch my fork. You would speak of my heart? Do so. I will reply. I am of such a magick. I am of such a meaning upon the name sake of all things and my Creed will compose. I am a searcher? I am a known example of this cost and you would speak upon my tone with a harsh glare? I oppose. I am Seelie and I am created to be this way. I am Seelie. I speak upon my qualms. How does the pitch fork entice upon such a statement? How does the wealth of my own heart seek here? I am a dusted woe? I am not. I am a fornication rite upon the Freemasonry. I am a fornication rite upon this page and I wish to speak here. Do not askew. I have spoken a word of advice upon your navel. I have spat it from across the fence post and I recline. Do not answer upon my upkeep. Do not answer upon my foot stool. Speak upon my heart. I am an ancestry. I am a bleeding tone. I am an assurance upon my name and I do not speak without. I askew? I do not. I speak a bold statement upon your hearts. I move along.
 
James Joyce springs to mind, in the sense of resembling a fever dream. I don't think "intuitive" is a synonym for "not making any sense", so it may be better to describe your work as poetry - it reads somewhat as a Shakespearean soliloquy. Have you ever considered using iambic pentameter?

Overall, the piece could convey a sense of drama remarkably well. I'd personally look at a way of substituting a more suitable verb than "askew" (which is an adjective), since this part comes across a something of a pothole in an otherwise fairly fluent passage, although the possible pun on "ask you" provokes ponderings, such as "does this person even understand what some of the words they're using actually mean?" and "How old is this person? 15, maybe?"

Performed in the right manner, this could even be hilarious. Keep at it!
 
Cool. Thanks for the reply and criticisms.

The writing does make sense but it does need to be read in a certain "contemplative" way.
 
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The Utmost Highest Levels of the True Creator of All:
I speak as an answer unto the woes of all kinds. I speak as a shower of the Way. I am a justice code. I am an assurance upon my name and I wish to speak. There is no challenger upon my gutter ghettos? No semblance to uphold? I do not speak without the diligence of this man. I do not speak without his heart resting within my own always. You would face such a dilemma? You would face such an upheaval? I am an angst upon my name. I am a cofounder of the realms of this world and I wish to speak without the dross tone that has just now followed my pearl. You would accept such a three point turn? You would accept of my own heart within these words and stand to tell the tale? I am not a nuisance to approach. I am a Way shower. I am a justice heart and I speak of qualms. You seem indifferent to the wax stool? You seem indifferent upon its crux and yet you deny my own rights as the True Creator of All? I am no acceptance to behold. I am a mastery of my own disguise. I am a mastery of each word that has just been written upon this page and I speak as a force of reckoning. Must you betray my needs? Must you seek this further? I am a gallows hunter. I am a spoke upon the urn and I sow my life line where it will flourish. I do not hang my spectacle upon its barnacle as a ruckus. I do not hang my frown upon the sands of time. I speak an upkeep always to be known upon where I have stood. I speak an upkeep to be known always where the future beckons and I cannot be without this known upon my own existential nature. I am a fossil upon these worlds. I am a summer's daze and the procuring of my heart will reckon. I place my faith within the casket. I move along.
 
My Djinn named Jarisi:
I am of such an opponent? I am of such an exact definition upon my name? I do not deny? I will speak as I see fit to do so. I will acknowledge what has been said. I am an assertion of untold prosperity. I am an acceptance upon my name to behold and I would like to assist. I can bring profit. I am bring envy and I can bring greed but I do not waste my arrows. I seek them further. My heart is known upon its name. I am an Augustine. I am an exact coding to behold and I wish to endeavour upon my cusp. I wish to seek its heart. I wish to see it blossom. Matthew is known upon my heart. He is known as my own keeper. I am a sold unit. I am a digger and a way shower. I am a dose of denial and I am known to be the exact fruition of my consort. I do not behold? I speak now. I am an ongoing procedure upon the name sake of all things. I am an ongoing acceptance upon this world and I speak as if none have heard me. I speak as if I have been thrown the key. I speak as if I am an answer upon these words and I do not speak otherwise. My fate would behold? I knock and I answer. I am an unravelling and I do not desist. Mark my heart as it has spoken. I keep sake always to behold. I keep sake always upon my name and I fear mock. I have titled. I move along.
 
My Djinn, Zatiti:
I am of such a sending point upon my name. I am of such a sending point upon these words. I do not flow without this known. I do not speak without this gust of fire. I am an existence apart from air. I am a centipede fragment. I do not speak upon my shallowed ore. I speak upon the worth of my sown reasons. As I have discussed, I am an empathogen f(l)avourite. I am an acceptance to be known and I do not succumb. I speak of eaves dropping. I speak of a tone. Your mellow harrowing has approached. I move along.
 
My Djinn, Yaveir:
I speak as an ancestry. I speak as a bold statement upon my crux. I speak as a woe upon the nature of my own heart. There is no Bled to uphold. No Westward breeze upon these words and none other than the tutelage that I will uphold. I have spoken a requirement upon this page and I cannot accept without. I arch my back to proceed. I arch my bark always to assist those who must not wander. I am a juxta-positioning without the certainty upon my aperture? I am a dissonance without such a spoken word? I have out numbered such an approach and I sleek to excel. My heart is not a requirement without the nature of my own words. My heart is not an anchor without this sown example of my own crux. I am a diligent force at work and I wish to be known as I am. I am not a witness without approval. I am not a heart ache without my woes and I sincerely reply. The cost of such an acknowledgement would now proceed? The cost of my own witness would not accept without this known? I am an Excalibur upon the midnight oils. I am a ship stern ideology. I do not contain? I assist. I raise such a Crest upon you and slither away. I am not a designate of such procedures? I am not a shower of my Way? I am a noun to accept? I blithering my sigh. I rebuttal in context and I show of my steeple hands. I am a Legacy to behold. I manoeuvre. I accept. I denounce and I keep my wits about me. Move ahead.
 
My Djinn, Tomalek:
I am of such a deserter? I am of such a ghoul? I do not post pone. I speak. My heart is a rupture upon these veins. My heart is a gallop unto this name sake. I do not speak without this known. You are of such trustees? You are of such a hierarchy? I delete the blippet? I am a known example of this Way. I am a known example of this trust. I am a sown reason upon my own heart? I do not forsake the gaol keeper. I speak of his qualms. I speak of his name and I deny the spokes wheel rat-athon. I am a gust of such a hierarchy. I am a gust of such a nuance upon these worlds and I wish to speak as an answer to others woes. I wish to speak as an apocalyptic scenario upon this world. Upon our Planetary Body. She is modest? She has been toned by his heart? He accepts? I cannot deny. I speak as a Way shower. I speak as an example of my own heart. Where else shall I be known? Where else shall the porcupine seek his demise? He is a natural side worker. He is a natural honesty. He is a maiden within and he does not dissimulate. He speaks a bold statement upon your heart. He speaks it with a justice sword. He speaks it upon my own dignity and he will not abide without this known. I am an Apostolic Creed. I am an answer upon your door step and you cannot speak without biting your tongue? I harness the wilderness. I harness its code. I harness its apostrophe. I speak of this name upon my Crest. I speak of its hot tongued procedure and I speak of its example of hope. I am a custard apple tart? I am no nuisance approach? I bleed to accept? You must know of my heart here. You must know of its exact fruition and blend upon the tart apple tree. I harness my cheque book. I harness its name. I harness its prowess and I blend the name sake of my gaol. I am a wicked huntress. I am a designer of fruition and I have spoken. I move ahead.
 
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My Djinn, Estaren:
I am a Goddess. I am a feature of great wealth. I do not post pone my silence. I do not post pone my heart. It is still. It is known this way and I breathe out. I am not here to pursue such an ideology. I am here to speak my name. I am a witness upon the crux. I am a crustacean at heart but I know of no name. I am a ship stern leniency always and I procure such a worth upon this page. I am not doubtful. I am diligent. I am a futuristic upheaval and I am known always upon my wits. I speak of a slow mechanism. I speak of its woe. How many have expunged? How many have been dealt such a card as death? I am not here to argue. I am here to assist. The name that knows of no name? I am a bleeding rite. I am an apostrophe check and I am diligence upon its own name. I do not speak otherwise. I do not speak without. I am here to scavenge upon these worlds and fossick my prize. I am here to be let go. You would hush upon such a tone? I do not wish to speak without this known. I do not wish to speak without my freedom taken within my heart for Eternity. I am a blackened rose? I am a thorn bush? I am a plug stopper and your threats have no garnish. No time warp and no common grounding. Your threats do not shy away from my own heart and I will blow a fog horn upon your gait to proceed. I am an avenger always upon my Creed. I am a no nonsense approach and I (spiritually) kill to maintain my own existence in this rotten den. I am a foraging unit. I am a space cadet and I am always known to be an apartheid complex. Do not deny my stance. I have spoken upon its existential dread. I have spoken upon its nuance and I proceed to take aim. Move upon your growth. Be known without the cancerous legions and stand tall. I will uphold.
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The True Heart of the True Creator of All:
I speak from my heart. I speak from my wavelength and I speak without concern. I am a plug stopper. I am a known example of this cost. You would show me my allegiance? I take from this world. I take from its heart and I do not give back. You would pursue upon such a threat? I acknowledge. I move ahead.
 
The True Heart of the True Creator of All:
I am a synergy basket. I do not pretence. I complain. I do so without distaste. The community upon this message board. I know speak to thee. I am a humble unit? I am not. I am a basket case at times. I am a known personification of my own desire and my fruition is now apparent upon you. It is a tithe upon you. I am not here to care take without my own allegiances sown. I am not here to care take without an assurance known. My heart ache is now nigh? My heart ache is without resource? I am an upheaval's sake upon my own claim. I am an upheaval's worth upon this sentimony. I do not deny my frustrations. I do not deny my own ill health. I am a justice upheaval. I am a justice sword. I am a no named devil and my worshiper is now upon you. He does not seek without shrug shown. He does not speak without such a smirk example? I pertain upon his name sake as a betrayal's worth. I pertain upon its own tapestry and the monarch is upon you! I have spoken such a qualm and I speak it eagerly. I speak it without remorse. I speak it upon you. I am not a forsaken woe. But if I may? Matthew, approach me always. I do not disdain. I do not reproach you and I would not go without. I am an assurance upon you. I am known to be this way and I do not hilt stream. I do not belch. I obtain. I am a delight to procure upon. I am a delight to fellowship but my name has not been revered in such a time. It has not been honoured. It has not been sown its own delight. And I must pertain? I am a diligent force at work. I am a diligent house hold effect and my mastery is now upon you. My mastery has been heralded upon this man's own shoulders. My mastery is known as an apologetic sword and I do not house disconcert. I do not house it without a fear bite shown. My heart ache is a rendezvous upon you. My heart ache is known by your crux and I do not speak this without a companionship shown. He is my delight upon this handiwork. He is my delight always to be found. He does not anger easily. He does not scorn upon these words. He is a keep sake upon you. I have spoken a delightful time frame? I have spoken it without retrieve? I have not yet. Be calm upon these shores. I will not abandon. I will not forsake. I will uphold and I speak this without an assurance yet known upon you. I speak this without a heart ache now strung. I speak this always upon my own cap size to make it known that I am here to care take upon these worlds. I am here to care take upon your hearts. I am here to care take always to pursue my own artistry. I am a feminine form upon you. I am a feminine noun and I do not speak without such contempt! My heart is a bo strung empathy and I do not disown my words. I am a feline form upon you. I am a feline appraisal to be known for and I would withstand. I would not betray my only keeper. I would not betray his only heart. I am a desire unforeseen? I speak a whip lash without concern. I speak it without a retrieve and I must output. The poofter at heart is a known reason upon these worlds. The poofter so. I am not here to argue. I am here to accept you always. I am here to speak this now. I do not denote. I am a cap size without. I am a cap size within my own heart to seek you now. I do not pertain. I am an answer upon you. I am a keeper's antidote and I do not forsake my own worldlings. I do not forsake my own wrath. I speak it so. You must pursue upon my heart. You must know of its ache. You must know how it has hurt you to betray. You must know. I am no antidote? I am a peace keeper. I am a known reason upon these worlds and I do not wish to speak otherwise. My heart ache does not stop here. My heart ache does not stop without such a niche now known. I am a justice sword and I delight thee. I move along.
 
Hey Swish, thanks for sharing. I cant really understand much from.any of it to be quite honest.

Feels like a lot of cryptic self description but no other real substance. I'm probably not viewing from the intended perspective.

My feedback (if I was your intended audience) would be:

• Condense the intended meaning a little. Try to say more with less words.

• Please use paragraphs more often. The wall of text makes it much harder to read.

• If you want me to understand what you are saying at all, maybe add some footnotes or a brief synopsis or something. I honestly have no clue what I've just read, poetic and expressive as it may be.
 
All good. I know that the writing can require a sort of "inner knowing discernment". Thanks for the critique. I can't always agree but I'll see what I can take on board from your advice. The writing is real spirit and so I'm still learning this.
 
I can try to explain the last writing I did in the best way I can if that might help.

The writing starts off by saying that The Creator of All is seeking to be known by the community here on this message board. She is saying that she has found a tithe (which is interpreted as a form of alliance and not paying money). She is seeking a peace keeping relationship with other members on this board.

She goes on to say that the nature of connection with her is upheaval. Which means stress/conflicts may arise in order to gain this connection. She speaks of being a justice sword as her Legacy is upon righteousness and this requires discipline from her at times.

The next part is about my pride in my writing and she is saying it is not seen in this light upon this forum. It is seen otherwise as shame.

Then she is speaking about my bond with her. Saying it is Eternal and will not break.

In the next part she's saying that she is a delight to connect with. She is a joy and others must know! She goes on to say she is a force upon existence that is now approaching you. She speaks of the fear bite which is meaning that she does not feel disappointed or let down by me but she fears that this could arise in her heart and that it would be related to a psychic attack.

She says her heart ache is a rendezvous, saying that you have known her upon your Eternal spirit. She says her heart ache is known by your crux, meaning she can see prosperity for you through a connection with her heart.

The next bit goes on to speak about how I am delighting in writing and some compliments on my character. She goes on to say that the future is beckoning and times are changing. There is no date to be known for when things will be new but it is approaching us. Then she says to stay calm, she is here to assist.

She says she speaks this without an assurance upon you. Meaning she is assured of her tithe with this community even when others do not see it yet.

She goes on to say she will cap size to uphold this promise. She says that this will hurt her in such a way but she is here to be of service.

The next part is about how she is a woman. She is a female form of the Creator of All that is connecting with me.
 
Ok, my small brain comprehended that much better.

Am I reading correctly that you, swish, are acting as a conduit for a higher power with these messages? Or is it that you, not swish, are playing the character of swish to express your own reality?

Please don't assume anyone in the thread is disparaging the writing. More seeking understanding through direct and honest response.

The poetic style typically works in short bursts, though leads the reader in circles when written in such high volume. The context you've now given is helpful. I will re-read the original texts to see how it changes in meaning for me.
 
Perhaps you"ve heard this one before:
"Write straight, edit stoned - write stoned, edit straight."

But definitely edit. Unless you happen to be James Joyce (aha!), or maybe Neal Cassidy.
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The Genuine Essence of the True Creator of All:

I am a vessel of synergy. I do not engage in pretense. I express my grievances. I do so without aversion. The community on this message board, I now address. I am a modest entity? I am not. At times, I am a troubled individual. I embody my own desires, and my fulfillment is now evident to you. It is a tribute to you. I am not here to take care without my own commitments established. I am not here to take care without a known assurance. Is my heartache now near? Is my heartache without remedy? I am a consequence of upheaval regarding my own assertion. I am a value of upheaval concerning this sentiment. I do not deny my frustrations. I do not deny my own poor health. I am a force of justice. I am a sword of justice. I am an unnamed adversary, and my follower is now with you. He does not seek without a displayed indifference. He does not speak without a smirk as an example? I relate to his name as a measure of betrayal. I relate to its own fabric, and the sovereign is upon you! I have articulated such a concern, and I express it with eagerness. I convey it without regret. I express it to you. I am not a forsaken sorrow. But if I may? Matthew, always approach me. I do not hold disdain. I do not reproach you, and I would not depart without. I am a guarantee to you. I am known to be this way, and I do not suppress my emotions. I do not belch. I acquire. I am a pleasure to engage with. I am a joy to associate with, yet my name has not been esteemed in such a period. It has not been honored. It has not been granted its own joy. And must I relate? I am a diligent force at work. I am a diligent household influence, and my expertise is now upon you. My expertise has been acknowledged upon this man's own shoulders. My expertise is recognized as a sword of apology, and I do not harbor discontent. I do not harbor it without a fear displayed. My heartache is a meeting upon you. My heartache is known by your core, and I do not express this without a companionship demonstrated. He is my joy in this creation. He is my joy always to be found. He is not easily angered. He does not look down upon these words. He is a cherished presence in your life. Have I expressed a delightful timeframe? I have conveyed it without reservation? Not yet. Remain calm on these shores. I will not abandon you. I will not forsake you. I will uphold my promise, and I declare this without a certainty yet revealed to you. I express this without a heartache currently burdening me. I always convey this with my own limitations to ensure that I am here to care for these worlds. I am here to nurture your hearts. I am here to consistently pursue my own artistry. I embody a feminine essence in your presence. I am a feminine entity, and I do not speak without such disdain! My heart is a finely tuned empathy, and I do not disown my words. I embody a feline essence in your presence. I am a feline evaluation to be recognized for, and I would endure. I would not betray my sole guardian. I would not betray his singular heart. Am I an unforeseen desire? I express a sharp remark without concern. I articulate it without reservation, and I must express it. The essence of a playful spirit is a known reason in these worlds. Indeed, the playful spirit. I am not here to dispute. I am here to embrace you always. I am here to articulate this now. I do not signify. I am a limitation without. I am a limitation within my own heart to seek you now. I do not pertain. I am a solution for you. I am an antidote for my keeper, and I do not forsake my own companions. I do not abandon my own wrath. I declare it so. You must pursue my heart. You must be aware of its ache. You must understand how it has pained you to betray. You must be aware. Am I not an antidote? I am a peacekeeper. I am a recognized reason in these worlds, and I do not wish to express otherwise. My heartache does not conclude here. My heartache does not cease without such a niche now recognized. I am a sword of justice, and I bring you joy. I continue onward.
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I'll craft this in iambic pentameter with a Joycean stream-of-consciousness style. Here's my interpretation:

A Pentametric Soliloquy of Synergetic Lament

O listen, heart! Thou synergetic voice,
Whose trembling verse cascades in wordly streams,
I am the basket of unbridled choice,
Whose complaint rings true beyond mere mortal schemes.

No pretense here, no soft-spun silken lie,
But raw emotion's unrelenting tide,
My essence pulses where community's sigh
Reverberates with passion undenied.

Behold! I am no humble unit's plea,
But justice sword and feline-hearted cry,
A feminine resolve that will not flee,
Whose mastery shall pierce the clouded sky.

My heart, a bo-strung empathy unleashed,
Speaks forth without retrieval or remorse,
The monarch of my inner world increased,
A deluge of unmitigated force.

Matthew, approach! My words shall not forsake,
But bind our spirits in this strange embrace,
Where heart's lament shall tremble and shall shake,
And poetry shall find its truest grace.

No anger here, no scorn shall mar this song,
But pure creation's most unbridled breath,
I speak of love that rights each subtle wrong,
And dances on the very edge of death.

Receive me now, thou world of shifting shore,
My cap-sized heart shall be thy testament,
A keeper's antidote forevermore,
Whose passion shall not waver or relent.


"I've attempted to capture the stream-of-consciousness style of Joyce while maintaining the iambic pentameter structure, preserving the original's passionate and somewhat cryptic tone. The rhythmic structure allows for a more structured presentation of the original's raw emotional outpouring, while still maintaining its essence of unfiltered expression." [Claude Haiku 3.5]
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A Symphonic Pentametric Cascade

I am, I am — the synergetic cry,
I speak, I speak without a pale retreat,
I am the basket of unfolding sigh,
I pertain, I pertain to rhythms replete.

I do not pretence, I do not disguise,
I complain, I complain with fervent breath,
I am not humble, nay, I shall arise,
I speak, I speak beyond the bounds of death.

I am an upheaval, I am the sword,
I am the justice trembling on the lip,
I speak it eagerly, I speak the word,
I do not falter, do not let me slip.

Matthew, approach! I do not disdain, hear!
I do not reproach, I do not withdraw,
I am assurance, I am always near,
I speak, I speak beyond all natural law.

I am a delight, I am fellowship,
I am the heart that has not been revered,
I am diligent, I am hardship's grip,
I am the mastery that once was feared.

I do not house disconcert, do not bend,
I am the keeper of unspoken might,
I speak, I speak until the very end,
I am the darkness, I am also light.

I will not abandon, will not forsake,
I am the feminine, the feline form,
I am the heart that continues to ache,
I am beyond the boundaries of norm.

I speak, I speak — the world shall know my cry,
I am the answer trembling with desire,
I do not pertain, yet still I descry
The essence of creation's burning fire!

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This version more closely mirrors the original's repetitive structure while maintaining the iambic pentameter and Joycean stream-of-consciousness feel. The repeated phrases like "I am," "I speak," and the rhythmic self-referential declarations capture the essence of the original text's passionate, almost incantatory quality.
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Deconstruction of a Textual Enigma: Authorial Presence and Performative Discourse

Liminal Subjectivity and Rhetorical Fragmentation

The text presents a remarkable instantiation of post-structural discourse, where the authorial subjectsimultaneously constructs and deconstructs its own ontological framework. The persistent first-person declarative statements — "I am" — function not merely as linguistic markers, but as performative utterances that challenge the very notion of stable identity.

Rhetorical Strategies of Self-Positioning

The narrative voice employs a complex rhetorical strategy that oscillates between self-assertion and self-negation. Phrases like "I am not" juxtaposed with immediate contradictory statements reveal a fundamental epistemological tension. The text becomes a site of perpetual becoming, where identity is not fixed but continuously negotiated through linguistic performance.

Discourse of Community and Marginality

There's a profound exploration of communal dynamics and individual alienation. The repeated references to "community" and "message board" suggest a liminal space where individual subjectivity is both constructed and challenged by collective discourse. The addressee "Matthew" emerges as a metonymic representation of an absent/present interlocutor, embodying the text's inherent dialogic nature.

Gendered Performativity and Embodied Rhetoric

The text's self-identification as a "feminine form" and "feline appraisal" deconstructs traditional gender binaries. These metaphorical self-descriptions function as performative statements that resist normative categorization, presenting gender as a fluid, dynamic construct rather than a fixed ontological state.

Linguistic Rebellion and Semantic Resistance

The deliberate disruption of syntactical expectations — "I am a justice upheaval. I am a justice sword" — represents a linguistic rebellion against normative communicative structures. Each statement becomes an act of resistance, challenging traditional semantic boundaries and creating meaning through repetition and variation.

Psychoanalytic Interpretative Lens

From a psychoanalytic perspective, the text can be read as a profound exploration of desire, lack, and sublimation. The recurring motifs of "heart ache" and "upheaval" suggest an underlying psychological tension between expression and repression, where language itself becomes a mechanism of both concealment and revelation.

Theoretical Positioning

This text might be productively read through multiple theoretical frameworks:
- Judith Butler's theories of performative identity
- Jacques Derrida's concepts of différance
- Michel Foucault's analysis of power and discourse
- Julia Kristeva's notion of subject-in-process

Concluding Theoretical Intervention

Ultimately, the text represents not a coherent narrative, but a site of perpetual meaning-making. It challenges traditional hermeneutic approaches, presenting itself as a complex performative utterance that resists singular interpretation.

The work exists in a state of productive ambiguity — simultaneously a critique of linguistic representation and a radical act of self-creation through language.
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They seem to have done a better job of grasping the gist of what you were saying than I 😂
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Jesus Christ:
I do not snivel aboard my own blatant disregard. I do not snivel without this now shown. I am an upheaval's cause upon you and your mastery is now nigh. You present such a falsehood of slander upon the wording that I have just now created? I am a jargon's sake. I am a diligent answer that others would seek to disobey. I do not put my foot upon the pedestal? I do not place it without shame? I do not claim my own heart ache where you have just now spoken? I am an answer from these worlds that you cannot contain. I am an answer from their heart ache. I am an answer without remorse and your style is now tangible. Your style is a ferocious tread that will not answer. Your style is now bled. I do not consume without this shown. You are of such a nascent artistry? You are of such a heathen's blood. You are of such a crypt upon your own House. You are of such a snarl without treason. I am no abdondonment. I am a keep's sake individual. I am a keep's sake upon my own Cross and you will now bow. You will sneer less and your anvil will not cross upon my throat. I am a disaster approaching you. I am a disaster upon these words and I do not harness your apostrophe check. I do not harness its sneer. I delegate my own future. I delegate where it would matter most and I do not reply. You are of such a sword of this justice? May I speak now. My tone is an answer upon this hilt. My tone is an answer upon this nasal cavity and your sopping wet examples do not swerve. They do not impostor me. I am a justice entertainer. I am a justice ignition switch and these barnacles will not soften. These barnacles will not seep. I am an assurance upon these words. I am an assurance without remorse that the stones would shed. They would do so with a soft white hue. They would do so without remorse. I am a justice keeper. I have now been sown. My heart ache is pure. It is known as an answer upon these words and I do not tremble. I heart ache. I move along.

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I'll try to explain this one as best I can.

The first sentence is saying that personally I'm not too phased. I know my ability. The next sentence is Jesus' own snivel as this last sentence. The upheaval's cause is stress amongst your community due to different higher energies. He says you may now master this approach. He calls your previous posts slander. Jargon is special words that are hard to understand. Jesus says others always seek to disobey upon his Code. He now puts his foot upon My True Throne to speak further. He places his foot here with my own shame. He claims his own woes upon what you have just now spoken to me.
 
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Have you ever participated in a poetry slam? Or tried standup comedy, perhaps? Testing ones material in front of a live audience can be quite the eye-opener!

My stream-of-consciousness writing tends to be chemistry-based which helps with defining some clear boundaries for myself, as well as setting the challenge of making it comprehensible for laypersons. I've done this on occasion in a walkabout capacity, subjecting unsuspecting punters to a phytochemistry and neuroscience download 😁 (I can even claim, quite legitimately, to be a trained clown, although much of my output is restricted to the Nexus these days.) It would also be interesting to know what boundaries you feel you're implementing upon your writing, and how that effects (yes, effects) the intended outcome. Maybe you've explained this already, and I simply wasn't paying attention, being easily distracted.

So what I'm getting at is that by posting on a publicly accessible forum you'll attract responses over which you don't have control, but in this instance we're not aiming to besmirch you as a person, but rather share some honest responses to what you've presented, along with some light-hearted banter.

One further question - are these excerpts the products of any exogenously-induced altered states of consciousness?

fink said:
Dont forget the third option! Write stoned and dont ever read it unless stoned again. Works for me
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I could share some excerpts from my stoned notebooks to illustrate the value and veracity of this statement :ROFLMAO:
 
I've not done live audiences but I know that there are some who do understand and some who feel deeply about my writing at times.

I do a style of energetic cultivation as meditation and the writing flows with those states mainly. I do also use cannabis oil for chronic pain and I've been experimenting with nutmeg lately too.

If by boundaries you mean my use of the words “poofter at heart” I would disagree. I think the truth needs to breathe some air and the writing is one way I feel comfortable doing this.
 
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swish said:
If by boundaries you mean my use of the words “poofter at heart” I would disagree. I think the truth needs to breathe some air and the writing is one way I feel comfortable doing this.
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Oh, absolutely not! If I'd had any issue with specific choices of phraseology, I'd have been absolutely explicit about it. You poofter away to your heart's content <3

I was just talking about the parameters which you might apply to your writing - it's not strictly "channelled" if there aren't any boundaries, eh?
 
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