Rebirth Experience

[TiMi716]

Reborn

Am I alive or am I dead?
Life flashing before my eyes.
Purging myself out of my head,
Leading downward toward my demise.

Pressure exploding my every cell,
My world stopped, facing destruction,
Deaf to reality, just a ringing bell,
Flash! Total annihilation…

Out of death comes rebirth;
Darkness dissolves behind White Light.
First moments on this new Earth,
Understanding the truth beyond sight.

We’re all blind living in the past,
Reality tainted by the forgotten
Through life growing, not too fast
Corrupting souls, becoming rotten.

Face it! Trust me, be not afraid.
Feel the cleansing of the fire,
See of what your world is made;
Reborn, realize the Divine Desire.



Since the experience, SWIM has been fascinated with it. Here is another attempt at an expression of the experience. Enjoy!

Peace

 

[ragabr]

Thank you for taking the time to share in this manner. Be strong!

 

[Pandora]

Hi There TiMi716,

I read voraciously but generally I don't do poetry. Got to say though, not bad and I did enjoy. Thank you so much.

Peace & Love,
Pandora

P.S. I love your avatar!

 

[Capt_Bones]

This is beautiful! It reminds me of my first contact with HBWR, where i finally "saw the light" and woke up

 

[cranialcandy]

Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed an alternative style of description.

much love