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There was a place

LuxObscura

Titanium Teammate
There was a place hidden in time,
where heat does not warm but forge,
where cold does not cool but harden,
where time does not pass nor start.

Repeated loud hammering, ringing echoes strike the anvil.
Hot fire, oppressive heat, loud flames that hiss.
Between hammer and anvil, glowing steel.
Turned, folded, hardened, shaped by will.

Countless sweat beads fall to the ground,
as the the hammers they are striking like thunder.
They are falling in rhythms, almost like mantra.
Between ringing and dulls, even a poet recognizes a rhythm, like aura in chakra.

Eternal fire that covers even the deepest, iciest, coldest, darkest winter.
And everything has been kept maintained by a hammer.
But also with the engulfing fire, as otherwise it would be devoured by darker.
Acting like a light source, as a lighter.

Now changing the perspective, from the surrounding to the voice of the smith.
I have been striking, again and again, the hammer falls like thunder.
Each blow a pulse that shakes the very bones, almost like I am trying to sunder.
And the pain is the hammer and sorrow the fire.

I have been hammering an eternity, but also kept from stopping.
Without continuing everything would turn to ice and stop its continuing.
Every hit feels heavier, drained no power.
They keep me running, the heat of the fire, the cold of winter, the steel bars between my hammer.

The bars are hissing, like no soul is missing.
And every hit forms its being.
Without this, there would be no livings.
And now shifting the perspectives from the world, to the smith, to the soul of the steel.

I was once formless, untouched, unnamed,
but the fire and hammer taught me through pain.
Folded, broken, rejoined, reforged,
but was never destroyed.

And while I was folded everything was unfolded.
What seems like weakening was actually reinforcement.
The fire scorched away what was weakness.
The cold showed me endurement.
The hammer gave me the rhythm, an intellect.
 
I very much like that! Thanks for sharing it. Did you write it?

It reminds me of The Sermon of Iron. I have shared this before but might as well share it again here as it certainly relates.

“The world now exists as unforged steel, the fires of hell and the hammers of time push the impurities out until there is nothing left but a gleam.” He spoke with a certainty that bordered on fanaticism. His callused hand griped leather bound to iron and moved swift against the black and grey lump. An orange glow spread out in the cracks of metal like tiny bolts of lightning. Each strike echoed in the forge like a thunderclap.

“What does that make you?” The apprentice’s words trembled with a curiosity tainted by fear.

“The devil.” His voice was stern and his eyes never left the anvil. He paused and sunk into a more gentle voice, gentle at least for a thirty-year blacksmith whose work had seen nine wars and countless minor skirmishes. “And God. Without the fire, nothing can be forged. Without metal, nothing can be worked. And without the crafter, nothing can be created. But alas I only work iron. Some men work the trees. Some men work the stone. Physicians work the flesh. Even the bards work words. We all do our part in shaping iron into steel. After aeons pass, when God is satisfied with his creation then the almighty will wield his sword, but until that day, we are still seated on the anvil having the devils beat from us and the fire burning away our sins.”


Welcome!
 
Thank you.
Yes I wrote it.
It started with 8 sentences which I wrote by myself and then chatted with ChatGPT and integrated its results.
There are lots of similarities, thank you for sharing.
What I wrote was inspired by Platon - Timaios and Hélène Cixous - The Laugh of the Medusa.
 
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