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A new rap song I wrote

Lyrics:

I'm a litter corpse
I'm a holocaust little kid course
I'm a low-casian
Motherfucker that's my worst
Occasion on the fuckin north porch

We dem sing em till they drum
Sing em till they reek their pillow cases in the runs
I'm a tiss toss mother fucker nonsense clucker tens
On the co

Yeah we beat em with the swish co
Beat em beat em beat em with the swish co
Tiss toss nine
Look at those grimes
On my coulor-cation and my holocaust fine lines

With the little kiddy coast
With the really pot roast
I'm a ghetto ghost
I'm a slick em down the holocaust
I'm a tiss-toss-casian mother fucker host

All around the world
We can see them with the killer coast girls
We dem see them beating
Mother fucker feels
We can beat em caste coast-casian
Mother fucker reals

We dem colour co
We dem slack a holocaust ghoul
We dem beat em with the rowboat-slicker-tac-toe mother fucker hoes
Mother fucker that's the blow torch

Slick em on the BC's
Slick em on the heel clicks
I'm a kiss-casian motherfucker
That's my eloquence steeze
That's my mother fucker holocaust please

We can slick em with the colour co
We dem beat with the fella flow
Take a 9 upon the po
We dem slick em till they reach caucasian
With billabong-bass frustrations

Holocaust boy
What you doing on the north pole
Mother fucker that's gaol
Eloquence fucker
Mother fucker
AK-(oc)casion
With the fuckin colour caste woe

What you doing with my seeds?
What you doing with my beads?
What you doing mother fucker on my streets?
Coast-coast-casian
Mother fucker that's a hatred

Sup mother fucker toast co
Mother fucker bellow
Mother fucker that's niche-posh-plato co
Elegance flows into the doze when you didn't know
Mother fucker I'm a christ watch
I'm a holocaust pissed off
I'm a colour coast (intelligible) wrist watch
Mother fucker that's a pissed off
 
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Here's another song:


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Lyrics:

Slack em to my sleuth
Slack em to my baby ruth
Yeah on the coast slack a tooth
On the co
Elegance to the flitter flow

Yeah this flow
Elegant doze
In the combs

Laquer tears flow

In the ghettos
In the platter prose
In the didn't knows
Allah catter grows
Allah catter souls
Yeah they're lost blows

What's doin co
Allah-kitty-kiss flow
Yeah pelic-ation oaku
Mother fucker this co

All the way to the north pole
All the way to my old school
Yeah mother fuckers cuss-casion with the woes
With the tac-tac-tac-tac-a-tock-lows

Yeah we feel your tone
Yeah we holocaust bologne tone doze
On the kiss-casian fuckin pose

I'm a slicker snack
I'm a colour code cricker crack
I don't mind slickin flaccs
To my doomsday fuckin pacts

I'm a colour co
I'm a mother fucker mephisto gold
Like a feeler fist coast-casian
Motherfucker that's coast blazin

What ya doin co
What you doin on the slick slack slow
What you doin down low
Motherfucker oh
That's my tic-tac-tic soul

I'm a ventriloquist
I'm a holocaust with my beast
I'm a slick majors on the east
On the co

Mother fucker that's cool
But you don't know how to rule
Don't know criss-cross-casians motherfucker
Don't know how to player hatred sucker

Yeah oaku knows
Elegance patter-christ flows
Mother fucker
I'm a criss-cross-casians
And I'm fuckin blazin
 
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Voidmatrix said:
seeing as rap has a genesis out of impoverished black culture in the US, a population often associated with being "primitive," "stupid," and "negative" I find your OPINION low-key racist.
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That's just your opinion, but he also talks about jazz music, which is part of black art too. I really think we shouldn't slap these ridiculous labels on everything. As a black person originally from Senegal, I find rap music pretty primitive as well. But honestly, it has nothing to do with skin color, for God's sake. We can't keep pushing this neomarxist labeling everywhere because it makes black folks look like they're just offended drama queens. So no, we really don’t need that kind of rhetorics, and he wasn’t racist at all. I think rap is a big shame for people in general. Most of it is just disgusting, which you definitely can’t say about jazz.
And seriously, don’t label everything as racist, racism is when you’re always thinking and talking about skin color. Leave black people alone and let us be. To eliminate racism, just stop talking about it- and this is a quote from a black actor Morgan Freeman. This is a music thread though, and I can relate to his opinion about rap.
 
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You don't know what you're talking about. While jazz was derived out of black culture, it's become academic and thus has been removed from black culture in a lot of ways.

Skr9 said:
And seriously, don’t label everything as racist, racism is when you’re always thinking and talking about skin color. Leave black people alone and let us be. To eliminate racism, just stop talking about it. And this is a quote from a back actor Morgan Freeman. This is a music thread though, and I can relate to his opinion about rap.
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I'm black... don't make assumptions. Now you have egg on your face.

Also, that's ignorant. Just because I choose to ignore race doesn't mean others will and that what they think doesn't/can't effect me.

Also, did you even read the thread?

And educate yourself on race dynamics in this country before you try and tell me what is and isn't racist or what does or doesn't have a racist tone.

One love
 
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Voidmatrix said:
it's become academic and thus has been removed from black culture in a lot of ways.
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What’s wrong with it being academic? Removed by whom, and does it really matter? I still see it as part of black art.

Voidmatrix said:
Also, that's ignorant. Just because I choose to ignore race doesn't mean others will and that what they think doesn't/can't effect me.
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I’ve never really had any problems, maybe because I’m polite and friendly to people? I think it mostly comes down to a person’s behavior. Friendly and polite people are always appreciated. When they’re not, it has nothing to do with race- it’s more about how people were raised. Personally, I’ve encountered way more negativity from black folks than from anyone else, although I am black. That’s just one more reason not to bring skin color into this discussion.
 
Skr9 said:
What’s wrong with it being academic? Removed by whom, and does it really matter? I still see it as part of black art.
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Again, look into race relations in the country and you'll answer your own question. In this country, it being academic means less black people are involved. Look at the jazz program at Lamont at DU.

Skr9 said:
I’ve never really had any problems, maybe because I’m polite and friendly to people? I think it mostly comes down to a person’s behavior. Friendly and polite people are always appreciated. When they’re not, it has nothing to do with race- it’s more about how people were raised. Personally, I’ve encountered way more negativity from black folks than from anyone else. That’s just one more reason not to bring skin color into this discussion.
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And that's just you, an anecdotal example, when there's millions of other black people in this country that have a very different story than you.

One love
 
I am an Aboriginal!
 

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The Traveler said:
Ok, could not resist to try the new tools out there (including their "you are not allowed to use these words" parts 😅).

"The Traveler's Guide" - Trav


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(Verse)
Yo, I’m blasting off, mind on a mission
Flexing through the stars, can’t stop this ambition
Bitches talking shit, but they don’t know my vision
Psychedelic dreams, I’m breaking through the prism

Rolling in the cosmos, feel that vibe
Philly grit, I’m here, watch this city thrive
Traveling the ether, nigga, I’m alive
Success in my sights, man, I’m ready to strive

(Chorus)
This is my Traveler’s Guide, through the dark
Mind on fire, igniting spark
Balling through the void, my mark
Psychedelic journeys, light up the sky

(Bridge)
The stars align, I’m breaking the mold
Bitch, I’m untouchable, watch unfold
In the city of brotherly love, I’m bold
Every step I take, feel the power I hold

(Chorus)
This is my Traveler’s Guide, through the dark
Mind on fire, igniting spark
Balling through the void, my mark
Psychedelic journeys, light up the park

(Outro)
So strap in tight, ready to fly
Travel vibes, we reach the sky
Through stars and dreams, we never die
This is our trip, yo, fly high


Kind regards,

The Traveler
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I must admit it sounds pretty impressive! I wouldn't have know it was generated. I suppose the base is not generated and comes from some kind of sound library, right?
 
Hey, enjoy. Rap is good, and I'm eclectic in musical tastes, so I am eventually in the mood for every different kind of music even if it doesn't get to a main playlist of mine. You have a rhythmic voice. My feedback would be that the level of the vocal track could be heightened, clearer and sharper, though I can't criticize because I'm not great at using DAW myself.
 
Transform said:
Sorry, that was the thread title, and I don't know why the forum software decided to render it like that. I've now edited the post accordingly. It was not in fact my intention to ask your opinion of that particular …specimen. The point was ultimately that your 10 minutes of effort managed to sound clearly better than something that has obviously been pumped through a hype machine for general public consumption. I would hope that additional effort might produce something I'd consider actually, properly listening to - whether that production involves use of an AI tool or not.
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I think me having decades of experience with various musical instruments, lyrics, musical theory, audio mixing and audio technology might have made my choices a tad more easy than to what a layman would experience. A.I., with my prompting experience, just made it VERY easy for me to pick the right components to combine it into a song that is made for easy listening.

Transform said:
For a bit more perspective, I just spent the weekend rehearsing playing a 'real', physical, acoustic instrument with a band of 40 musicians, culminating in two live performances. There were moments of being so moved through the flow of the music that I was on the verge of tears. The guy playing next to me had to pause a couple of times himself, drying his own eyes; I adjusted my volume to make up for this - just a little thing that stuck with me, of being there in the moment.

I guess I'm saying this makes for a very different baseline to be judging from. [No rappers were involved in the making of this music.] If you promise to come up with something really good, I'll practise my instrument more often too. 😁
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I myself always loved jamming sessions with like minded people, quite some excellent stuff came out of that. <3


Kind regards,

The Traveler
 
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