First song ever!

[ayalove]

Nice track aya

 

[hixidom]

That was very nice. My main thought while listening was that it sounded "mushy". You can take that however you want.

When can we expect more?

 

[Guyomech]

Great first track, Aya. Nothing wrong with keeping it short at this early stage.

A lot of good stuff there, including a good melodic theme. I would second Hixi on the "mushy" comment though... Especially in that second half, the bass gets so distorted that I thought it started to lose structure a bit. The melody in the background might be too distant to offer the structure that part needs... Maybe a bit more oomph on the kick drum, also for the sake of structure. Then maybe play around with the bass distortion parameters... You may find a version that sounds cleaner without giving up any energy or depth.

Be sure to post this in Music Bin!

 

[Wax]

Personally I love this track, I like the "mushy" it gives a cool contrast between the melody. Although I really love the melody after the drop and agree it could be brought to the front more just because it is so sick. It's very dark and I get a horror/evil laboratory/resident evil type vision when I listen to it.

Be sure to update us on the progress!

 

[Purges]

Good stuff! Keep it up :thumb_up:

 

[WEM]

Can't wait to hear your second song!8)