Need honest feedback about this musical Piece.

[yaxar]

Greetings,

Recently, 've found the love for fiddling with music production. Used to have an alternative band, played mainly sabbath, SOAD, typical.
Now, spice comes into the picture...

http://www.myspace.com/560928223

M only a NooB to electronic production and would certainly like to learn more about it. Guess I only require some love and appreciation.

Love and Light

Looking forward to creating something beautiful - together!

 

[jbark]

Nice!! I like it.

1st one: More layers maybe? Get some craziness going on underneath to give it some depth. Take this with a grain of salt though - i am no musician and i do have a decided predilection for layerd electronica.

Quite like the 2nd one. Needs developing and a more changing structure IMO, but great hooks and beats!had me intrigued and wanting more!

3rd one is nicely developed. It grooves and progresses. Again maybe some layers to fill in some of the gaps.

4th one. darker at points. I like the creepy layering of voices(?) and small sounds. It progresses nicely as well.

They all sound like the beginnings of some great tunes! Thanks for sharing, and again, take my comments in context - I listen all the time, but know nothing about creating music!

Keep it up and keep sharing!

JBArk

 

[yaxar]

Thank you sir, for lending me your listening. Your feedback is thoroughly appreciated. Curious about the craziness that you mentioned in the first one. Would like to know what did you have in mind, any artists?
I am glad to have found the nexus. The love and support one finds here is ... well, beyond any word

yaXar