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OHT - Editing the text

I chose "Equipment" from your last list, since there's a couple points where I could contribute more confidently. I will tag the changes as you asked... don't know if there's anyone else reviewing contents, though.

And those recurrent questions will keep coming... some people will keep trying the easy way, no matter how many available sources they have to answer them. But once the document is ready, questions will give another chance to promote and distribute the OHT Manual. We cannot defeat laziness, but we can make it a lot more obvious :)
 
The questions themselves don't bother me. It's the fact that I've already answered them in the manual but cannot hand it out to them that irks me :)

I will take a look at Setting, Sitter and Exploring Hyperspace then on my own. Thanks for helping me on this!
 
Ok, here's the revision of the Equipment chapter.

I've tagged all the changed entries, although many of the changes tagged are really minor... Overall I extended a little bit the plant growing section (and I refrained myself, I promise) and added a new knowledge review question about it to balance it better with the larger section about mushies ;)

Also tagged for deletion (sadly) the link to exotic earth exchange.

Hope it's useful, let us know if you need anything else.
 

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Thanks a lot for the outstanding editing.

I think I have gone over all the other chapters more or less and as far as the text goes I'd say it's about ready to go through a general proof-read of the entire thing. This means I'll clean it up in the next one or two days and put the updated full version pdf online for others to check. At the same time there are some people outside of the nexus that have agreed to proof-read it and they will be given a copy as well.

For this matter however I would like to get the image-problem solved first. I'm missing about 5 images and three or four I'm uncertain about. It's not much, but only one can already cause considerable problems so I'd rather not start spreading copies of this before I don't have all of them straightened out.

If in the mean time you feel like looking at another chapter, let me know which one, so I can give you the newest version. Due to formatting I've been changing little things in all of them.
 
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