Interesting... Well done, and it reminds me of some stuff I like (Gez Varley, Plastikman, u-Ziq). A little cold and mechanical, but not necessarily in a bad way.
I think a trap that a lot of electronic musicians fall into is in wanting to do these long songs, 6 and 7 minutes... There's nothing wrong with doing an epic piece like that from time to time. But I don't think this song evolved or changed enough to require that kind of length. It starts with a great buildup, and if you were to trim it down a bit you could keep it evolving like that through the whole piece.
I also wonder if the samples don't maybe break the spell a bit? At the very least, I think they need to be smoothed out a bit so they don't cut in and out quite so abruptly. I actually find them hard to understand.
Anyway, you asked for feedback... Hope you don't mind. Sounds like you must have some experience composing... Got any more?
I think a trap that a lot of electronic musicians fall into is in wanting to do these long songs, 6 and 7 minutes... There's nothing wrong with doing an epic piece like that from time to time. But I don't think this song evolved or changed enough to require that kind of length. It starts with a great buildup, and if you were to trim it down a bit you could keep it evolving like that through the whole piece.
I also wonder if the samples don't maybe break the spell a bit? At the very least, I think they need to be smoothed out a bit so they don't cut in and out quite so abruptly. I actually find them hard to understand.
Anyway, you asked for feedback... Hope you don't mind. Sounds like you must have some experience composing... Got any more?